Attempting a recently appeared exam question can be beneficial in assessing one’s level of preparation for the IELTS exam. Let’s try a recent IELTS Writing Task 2 question that was asked in the exam 1-2 months ago. You can first attempt it on your own and then compare your answer with the model solution provided below. Here is the essay question:

Question:

Ordinary people try to emulate famous personalities by observing them on television or reading about them in newspapers.

What is the reason behind this trend?

Is it advisable to imitate famous personalities?

Support your answers with relevant examples from your personal experience and knowledge.

You should aim to write at least 250 words for this essay.

Now, let’s compare your essay with the model answer below and determine whether you have used appropriate vocabulary similar to the one used in the model answer and if your body paragraphs are well-structured.

Model Answer:

In today’s modern era, it is quite common to observe ordinary individuals attempting to imitate famous personalities they admire when they see them on television or read about them in newspapers.

To begin with, there are several reasons behind the increasing inclination of people to follow celebrities. One reason is that self-proclaimed fans of famous individuals, such as actors or sports stars, harbor a desire to attain fame within society themselves. For instance, someone who dresses in a similar fashion to their idol, such as Shahrukh Khan, believes that they will gain more attention from their friends. Additionally, there are individuals who believe that by emulating their role models, they too can achieve a luxurious lifestyle and substantial success in terms of wealth, expensive vehicles, and other possessions.

Although the trend of copying others is widespread, it is not truly commendable. This is due to the fact that true happiness can be derived from one’s unique style rather than imitating someone else through clothing or material possessions, which only bring temporary satisfaction. Moreover, it has been found that individuals can live more comfortably and confidently by embracing their own individuality. For example, a woman who wears high heels to her office, inspired by a television actress, may find it cumbersome to rush for public transportation.

In conclusion, it is evident that many people attempt to emulate their favorite television personalities, which is not an ideal practice. Instead, individuals should strive to adopt positive attributes from others, such as their principles and values.

(284 words)

Here are some words/phrases that are suitable for this type of essay:

Useful Vocabulary:

In today’s modern era

To begin with/To start with/To commence with

One reason is that/It is due to the fact that

Moreover/Other than this/Furthermore

For example/For instance

In conclusion/To sum up/To conclude with

Possession

Admirable

Emulate